The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts
depicts
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the percentages of British pupils of an
England University
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English university
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that
available
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are available
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to produce other foreign languages
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English in 2 different years; 2000 and 2010. By and large, some pupils dominated to speak in French, German, or Spanish only,
another
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other
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students
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were able to make conversation in one or two other
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languages
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, and the rest could not talk in other languages unless in English.
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with, in 2000, the
number
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of
students
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who can speak French was 15% but in the next 1o years, its
number
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decreased by 5%. The same trend happened to those who could not
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speak languages
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other language than English, which within 10
years
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10-year
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had
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fell
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by 10%.
However
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, the opposite trend happened to the category of
students
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who speak in Spanish, only one other language, and two other languages. It can be seen that the
number
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of
students
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in these categories had increased from 2000 to 2010 by 5%.
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other categories made
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gradually
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changes, it seemed that only
students
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who could speak German experienced no changes by getting stable in its
number
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, 10%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • multilingualism
  • globalisation
  • immigration
  • education policy
  • career prospects
  • cultural understanding
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • increased/decreased
  • significant
  • trends
  • shifts
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