The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts
depicts
the percentages of British pupils of an Change the verb form
depict
England University
that Correct your spelling
English university
available
to produce other foreign languages Add a missing verb
are available
beside
English in 2 different years; 2000 and 2010. By and large, some pupils dominated to speak in French, German, or Spanish only, Replace the word
besides
another
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other
students
were able to make conversation in one or two other language
, and the rest could not talk in other languages unless in English.
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languages
To begin
with, in 2000, the number
of students
who can speak French was 15% but in the next 1o years, its number
decreased by 5%. The same trend happened to those who could not produce
other language than English, which within 10 Verb problem
speak languages
years
span of period, the Correct your spelling
10-year
number
had
fell Unnecessary verb
apply
down
by 10%.
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apply
However
, the opposite trend happened to the category of students
who speak in Spanish, only one other language, and two other languages. It can be seen that the number
of students
in these categories had increased from 2000 to 2010 by 5%.
While
other categories made a
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apply
gradually
changes, it seemed that only Change the adverb
gradual
students
who could speak German experienced no changes by getting stable in its number
, 10%.Submitted by e.warikar on
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