The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The provided pie chart illustrates the visual representation of
energy
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types produced in France in two years, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, Coal is the most produced one in both two years,
in contrast
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, other kinds of
energy
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which are not mentioned by their names take the least piece from the pie. For talking about a decrease, as seen from the chart, only one type of
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witnessed a fall.
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is Petrol which became 19.55% in 2005,
while
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it was one of the backbones in 1995 with 29.27%. Coming to growth, the slices of Gas and Coal witnessed a very slight increase by 1% merely, and
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30.31% and 30.92% respectively in 2005. Contrarily, the production of Nuclear and other kinds of
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have
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percentage-wise:
portion
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a portion
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of Nuclear
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rose from 6.4% to approximately one-tenth of the pie, and other types of
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almost doubled(4.9% in 1995, and 9.1% in 2005).
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