The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.

The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.
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The line graph shows the average daily
spend
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spending
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of three categories by international
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visitor
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visitors
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to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017.
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international
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an international
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visitor
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spends their time
for
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business activity, and visiting friends
as
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the
least
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last
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category. In the business category, average daily spending by
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visitor
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visitors
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went up to USD 320 in 2000 and
then
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fell drastically to USD 180 in 2004 and fluctuated until 2017.
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Visitor
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A visitor
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who spends their time
for
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visiting friends reached
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peak
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USD 220 in 2002. And decreased and fluctuated.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitor with synonyms.
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