Millions of people move to English speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answers
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First of all, lots of young people
wants
to become successful and live peacefully with a great job and well-paid. But they have to study in university before getting a job, so they usually choose Change the verb form
want
a really good educational universities
and most of them Correct the article-noun agreement
a really good educational university
really good educational universities
located
in English countries Add a missing verb
are located
such
as Great Britain, United
States of America, Australia, Canada Correct article usage
the United
and
etc.
There is Correct word choice
apply
enormous
difference between Kazakh or Russian universities and English countries. We all know about very impressive universities: Oxford, Harvard, Cambridge and more. They have the best educational process which is why and how their students Add an article
an enormous
becoming
successful and Wrong verb form
become
having
a great labor. Wrong verb form
have
Therefore
most Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
teenagers
from Kazakhstan or Russia Add an article
the teenagers
Correct subject-verb agreement
want
wants
to move there. Correct subject-verb agreement
want
In
addition
most Add a comma
addition,
of
young people Change preposition
apply
scared
of failing ENT, and literally every university chooses you only if your exam is Add a missing verb
are scared
atleast
higher than 100+ points, because of the fact thatCorrect your spelling
at least
,
it gives a hard time for teenagers with that exam and Remove the comma
apply
its
easier for them to do the IELTS test and move to other country to study in good condition.
In the end, it is actually perfect that nowadays young people think about their future and live like in sweet dreams. Correct your spelling
it is
However
they are scared of exam Add a comma
However,
that
is
actually takes the responsibility of their lives. If you Unnecessary verb
apply
passed
ENT, you will be successful, if you Wrong verb form
pass
didn't
make it, you will become a loser.Wrong verb form
don't
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