The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the average of

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and

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in a country who are involved in some kinds of household task like cooking, cleaning, and many things on every day

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had the highest percentage in both household work and average

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on household work. The pet care was literally the same in both

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, In cooking

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had 80

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and where

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had only 60

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and

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had the highest average

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than

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. When it comes to cleaning the

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play a main role where they had 70

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and

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had only 45

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and the average

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was a little higher than

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. Both

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played

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equal role in pet care which was 20

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. In house repairs the

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had a higher percentage than

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, they spent 20 per cent of the average

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repairing housework

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only worked 10

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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