The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used five different communication methods between 1998 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used five different communication methods between 1998 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates how much
percentage of people used five different types of communication approaches from 1998 to 2008.
Overall
, it can be observed that the proportion of cellular phone service outnumbered that of landline
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service
and became the most
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popular method
to communicate in the area in 2002.
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of cellular phone service took up the maximal proportion over the years, after three consecutively dramatic increases from its lowest point
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15% to the peak
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% in 2008. Interestingly, the initial highest percentage of all only
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fluctuated
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between 15% and 20% and remained the same ratio as that in 1998. In
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of the
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internet
service, the counterpart kept a stable trend before 2002 and, after that, was seen a significant change from about 5% to almost 19% and
finally
rose slowly to 20%. In the meanwhile, the proportion of fixed broadband almost stayed the same despite a slight
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fluctuation
after 2002. As for the least frequent
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of mobile broadband, the
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number
has just gradually grown
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only a little bit from
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original
0% to 4%.
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