The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

* GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
The bar chart shows the percentage of GDP
that is
spent on
healthcare
in a number of different European
countries
over a ten-year period. It is salient to note that there is great variation between the
nation states
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nation-states
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in terms of expenditure with high and low levels of spending,
as well as
increases and decreases over time. Certain
countries
can be described as high-spending compared to their peers. Specifically, Switzerland and Belgium spent the largest proportion over the period with 11 per
cent
and 10 per
cent
respectively.
This
is compared to Lithuania and Estonia
who
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which
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spent the least (4-5 per
cent
and 3 per
cent
).
This
means Switzerland
almost
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apply
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spent 75 per
cent
more than Estonia as a percentage of their respective GDPs. Over the period there was some variation in the percentage of
healthcare
investment, with increases or decreases of between 1-2 per
cent
.
For example
, Denmark , Poland, Lithuania, Slovenia and Norway all saw increases in spending.
However
, France, Netherlands and Luxemburg experienced a fall. The Netherlands was the only country where spending deviated significantly, dropping from 10 to 8 per
cent
.
By contrast
, certain
countries
saw no change in the money they allocated to
healthcare
over the years in question. Spain (8 per
cent
) and Estonia (3 per
cent
)
and
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apply
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fall into
this
category.
Overall
, the amount of money spent on
healthcare
differs dramatically between the different
countries
.
Furthermore
, it appears that
health care
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healthcare
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spending fluctuates year upon year in many of the
countries
surveyed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words healthcare, countries, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • Percentage increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Fluctuation
  • Economic factors
  • Healthcare priorities
  • Public spending
  • Comparative analysis
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