You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The illustration demonstrates the stages in the collection of
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
to be used as drinking water
in a town in Australia.
Overall
, it is a 5 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with the capture of water
when it rains and finally
resluts
in clean drinking Correct your spelling
results
water
being used in people's homes.
First of all, when it rains, water
is captured on the roof of people's houses. The water
runs down the roof and into the gutters, where it then
flows into drain pipes attached to the side of the house. After that, all drain pipes of the house flow into one larger system, from where the water
is then
run through a water
filter. Once the water
is filterd
, it Correct your spelling
filtered
then
flows into larger storage tanks where it is held until a later time.
Following that, the water
is transfered
to a Correct your spelling
transferred
water
treatment tank where chemicals are added into
it. From Change preposition
to
this
, the water
is ready to be deliveried
via pipes that flow from the treatment tank to people's homes.Correct your spelling
delivered
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