You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The illustration demonstrates the stages in the collection of
rain
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rainwater
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water
to be used as drinking
water
in a town in Australia.
Overall
, it is a 5 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with the capture of
water
when it rains and
finally
resluts
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results
in clean drinking
water
being used in people's homes. First of all, when it rains,
water
is captured on the roof of people's houses. The
water
runs down the roof and into the gutters, where it
then
flows into drain pipes attached to the side of the house. After that, all drain pipes of the house flow into one larger system, from where the
water
is
then
run through a
water
filter. Once the
water
is
filterd
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filtered
, it
then
flows into larger storage tanks where it is held until a later time. Following that, the
water
is
transfered
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transferred
to a
water
treatment tank where chemicals are added
into
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to
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it. From
this
, the
water
is ready to be
deliveried
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delivered
via pipes that flow from the treatment tank to people's homes.
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