The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the stages in the collection of
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
to be used as drinking Use synonyms
water
in a town in Australia.
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Overall
, it is a 5 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with the capture of Linking Words
water
when it rains and Use synonyms
finally
Linking Words
resluts
in clean drinking Correct your spelling
results
water
being used in people's homes.
First of all, when it rains, Use synonyms
water
is captured on the roof of people's houses. The Use synonyms
water
runs down the roof and into the gutters, where it Use synonyms
then
flows into drain pipes attached to the side of the house. After that, all drain pipes of the house flow into one larger system, from where the Linking Words
water
is Use synonyms
then
run through a Linking Words
water
filter. Once the Use synonyms
water
is Use synonyms
filterd
, it Correct your spelling
filtered
then
flows into larger storage tanks where it is held until a later time.
Following that, the Linking Words
water
is Use synonyms
transfered
to a Correct your spelling
transferred
water
treatment tank where chemicals are added Use synonyms
into
it. From Change preposition
to
this
, the Linking Words
water
is ready to be Use synonyms
deliveried
via pipes that flow from the treatment tank to people's homes.Correct your spelling
delivered
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