Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Dear Manager, I am writing an
inquire
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for
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about
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accommodation in the Royal
Hotel
. When I was planning to travel
in
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Lahore I was bewildered
for
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accommodation.
Therefore
, I watched the advertisement of your
hotel
on the Instagram page.
Then
I decided to contact
with
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you for extra information.
Firstly
, I and my family will be
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from Australia to Pakistan in the first week of the coming month which is 7th December, 2023. I would like to stay
least
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for
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one week from 7 to 13th December and I will leave the room on 14th December before 11 am in the morning. I need two rooms for my family which have the facilities of two separate beds and one is
family
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bed in another room. There are window side rooms so we can see the beautification of
the
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nature from our glass window. I want
also
know
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about the charges
of
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these two rooms.
Furthermore
, what is the advanced payment
of
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each room which I will pay?
Moreover
, what type of
excerise
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exercise
in your
hotel
which
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we can amuse from it? Is there any gym area
nearby
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your place? The shopping malls are available close to the
hotel
? The Queue cinema is how
much
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far from your
hotel
? I am looking forward to hearing from
your
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back. Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure correct use of prepositions and verb tenses to improve clarity and coherence.
suitable writing tone
Avoid informal language and maintain a formal tone throughout the letter for consistency.
single idea per paragraph
Use separate paragraphs for different topics to enhance readability and organization.
complete response
Address all points of the task, including inquiring about the cost of the weekend and nearby activities more specifically.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Arrangements
  • Check-in/Check-out
  • Double room/Suite/Family room
  • Amenities
  • Rates
  • Reservation
  • Cancellation policy
  • Leisure activities
  • Attractions
  • Cuisine
  • Allergen-friendly
  • Excursions
  • Itinerary
  • Accessibility features
  • Anticipate
  • Assistance
  • Confirm
  • Enquire
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