The graph below shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950,1970 and 1990. Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The given diagram illustrates different contributions made by four business sectors in three selected years (1950,1970 and 1990) for
Indian
economy. Correct article usage
the Indian
Overall
, the self-employment sector
and industries sector
have performed more positive
than the service Change the word
positively
sector
and agriculture sector
.
After contributing 5 percent
to Change the spelling
per cent
Indian
economy in 1950, the self-employment Add an article
the Indian
sector
made a tremendous increase of
its Change preposition
in
contribution
to 25 percent
in 1970, later reaching approximately 37 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1990, which was the highest Change the spelling
per cent
contribution
among the four sectors. In stark contrast, the agriculture sector
made the second highest contribution
of 35 percent
in 1950, Change the spelling
per cent
then
it dramatically decreased to 10 percent
in 1990. Change the spelling
per cent
Similarly
, the service sector
also
had a decreasing trend for
its Change preposition
in
contribution
, starting from 27 percent
in 1950 to 8 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1990.
Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the industries sector
showed a different pattern of contribution
. It started with 20
Correct article usage
a 20
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
contribution
, then
reached its peak at 27 percent
in 1970, later it dropped to 23 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, which was still the second highest Change the spelling
per cent
contribution
in 1990.Submitted by rony_yu on
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