the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts compare the percentages of university students at one school in the United Kingdom who were capable of speaking other foreign languages in two different years, 2000 and 2010.
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, Spanish speakers hold significance in both periods.
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, there are no major changes in these two years. In 2000, bilinguals, other language speakers, and Spanish speakers were 10%, 15%, and 30%, respectively. Whilst the other dialects and Spanish increased their dominance to 20% and 25% in 2010, people who can use two languages hold the same proportion in the chart. The remaining three are people that cannot speak any other languages, people that can only speak French or German. 20% of all didn't use any other foreign dialects except for their mother tongue in 2000,
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,
this
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decreased to a tenth of the whole in 2010. French users occupied 15% but
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saw a slight fall of 5% in the later year.
German
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, though held the smallest percentage of all, remained unchanged in both periods of time.
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