The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
pie chart illustrates seven different categories of households living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Generally speaking, 14% Verb problem
apply
British
households were insolvent in 2002 and half of those poor families were sole Change preposition
of British
parents
and singles without any child.
Overall
, 26% of all households in the UK lived single parents
. Currently, there are a large number of single parents
. They raise their children alone.People in the UK who were poor mostly fell under sole
parent category in 2002.
Correct article usage
the sole
To begin
with,the poverty rate for couples with children was less than a fifth, while
in single seniors, couples and couples with children it was less than 9%. The second largest segment who were needy were the single person without any child and their percentage was 24%.Therefore
,aged people, whether single or were doing good financially as only one in twenty of these family type
was poor. The number of single Fix the agreement mistake
types
parents
prevailed, who
surpassed all.Correct word choice
and
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