The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates seven different categories of households living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Generally speaking, 14%
British
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households were insolvent in 2002 and half of those poor families were sole
parents
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and singles without any child.
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, 26% of all households in the UK lived single
parents
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. Currently, there are a large number of single
parents
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. They raise their children alone.People in the UK who were poor mostly fell under
sole
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parent category in 2002.
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with,the poverty rate for couples with children was less than a fifth,
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in single seniors, couples and couples with children it was less than 9%. The second largest segment who were needy were the single person without any child and their percentage was 24%.
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,aged people, whether single or were doing good financially as only one in twenty of these family
type
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was poor. The number of single
parents
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prevailed,
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surpassed all.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words parents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • category
  • families
  • poverty
  • UK
  • single-parent families
  • couples with children
  • disparities
  • economic factors
  • welfare support
  • job market conditions
  • social issues
  • proportional breakdown
  • significant percentage
  • data summary
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