The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.

The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.
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The carts illustrate the percentages of children's co-curricular activities by gender. All the values are shown in percentages.
Overall
, most the the
boys
are interested in playing basketball and
computer
games
, but the
girls
to dancing,
computer
games
& and netball.
Furthermore
, some activities are quite common for both
boys
and
girls
.
Firstly
, 34% of
boys
like to play
computer
games
which shows the highest value.
While
,
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basketball is showing 26% which is the second highest.
In addition
, reading activity catches only 2% of
boys
. In total, 60% of
boys
are attracted to
computer
games
and basketball.
On the other hand
, around 27% of
girls
keep busy with dancing, but 16% to
computer
games
which is a common activity between
boys
and
girls
.
Additionally
, only 11% of females go to gymnastics which is the lowest value in the chart.
However
, The same percentages of males and females are listening to music, which is 10 in value.
Moreover
, reading is
also
a common activity, but
girls
like that much more than
boys
which is nearly 11 times in percentage.
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