The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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about how rainwater is collected and

then

becomes drinkable

water

after plenty of procedures in an Australian town.

Overall

, it is visible that much equipment was made under the ground to filter the

water

, to combine the

water

in

a

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storage, followed by

water

treatment by using chemicals,

as a result

,

become

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everybody

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well-known drinking

water

.

To begin

with, there is a specially constructed tube which is attached to the house for draining the rainwater into

water

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filter machine.

Subsequently

,already cleaned

water

is poured into the storage from where the

water

is transported with the special tube into the

water

treatment process.

Afterward

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,with the help of chemicals that are mixed with

water

,

water

becomes purified and safe to drink. Later on,

well processed

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water

appears in all houses when people turn on the faucet.