The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The
given
pie chart diagrams represents the difference between 1958 and 2008 Verb problem
apply
of
adult sharing their time in different activities in a country.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, over a span of several years, it can be clearly observed that people did not go through any major significant transformation in their working activity. There are slight changes in working, sleeping and going out with family and friends.
To begin
with 1958, as per the given representation 33% persons were workoholic
, 8% of individuals spent their time Correct your spelling
workers
in
relaxing at home followed by 32% Change preposition
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Correct pronoun usage
who like
like
to Wrong verb form
liked
sleeping
and only 2% of people Replace the word
sleep
are
travelling to work, where 19% of human beings went out with their family and friends followed by 6% humans had other interests or playing sports.
Comparatively in 2008, individual changed their working habits by 42%, later relaxing at home Unnecessary verb
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also
increased by 5% to 13%, but sleeping habit are
decreased to 25% followed by going out with friends and family by 6%, Unnecessary verb
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although
there were changes in travel to work from 2% to 8% and same with other interests or playing sports 8%.Submitted by shubhashish.bobby on
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