The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to English,in 2000 and 2010
The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of different linguistic abilities among British students who knew English at one university between 2000 and 2010 .
Firstly
, it is immediately noticeable that a great number of students in 2000 spoke only Spanish and in 2010 they increased at
5 % , from 30 to 35 respectively . Change preposition
by
In contrast
, who
knew two other languages and only German still Correct pronoun usage
those who
remain
unchanged Wrong verb form
remained
during
10 years and was equal to 10 per cent .
Change preposition
for
Secondly
, the number of bilingual
grew Fix the agreement mistake
bilinguals
up
from 15 to 20 and only the native English speakers Change preposition
apply
vice-versa
decreased by half . Correct word choice
and vice-versa
In addition
, in 2000 British who were able to speak in French more than 5 % in comparison with 2010 , 15 and 10 % .
Looking from an overall
perspective , majority
of British students could speak Correct article usage
the majority
at
Spanish in two different Change preposition
apply
period
of time .Change to a plural noun
periods
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