The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons
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A glance at the two charts provided represents the proportion of British
students
who were capable of speaking languages other than English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident from the information supplied that Spanish was the preferred language
by university students
in the UK; while
German
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the German
language
had no significant change during the period given.
To begin
with, in 2000 English was the second biggest percentage accounting for 20% after Spanish. While
French and Another
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other language
Language
categories can be spoken by 15% of the whole proportion, students
who could speak German and two other languages only contributed 10%.
On the other hand
, the percentage of students
who could speak English declined steadily to 10% in 2010. Similarly
, there was also
a considerable decrease in students
who could speak French; whereas
those who could speak another language
saw a significant growth and contributed to 20% of the whole percentage.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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