The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The assigned pie chart illustrates information on the post-school qualification held by Canadian
students
in the age
groups of 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. These citizens held degrees
in different nine streams and the total of candidates included 729000.
It is evident from the pie chart that the highest number of students
enrolled in social which was the same was almost 21% and humanities also
had a constant number of students
who held a degree in it which was 5%. Whereas
, adults and seniors held degrees
in MBA which was doubled by 3%. ,Whilst the lowest subject was other which pupils were held degree by 25 to 35% and 45 to 55% it was accounted 3%.
Probing ahead, the Remaining rest of subjects held degree by Canadian students
were in Administrative
, Education and nursing it was nearly (about 19% to 15%, 15% to 13% and 7% to 11% respectively). Replace the word
administration
However
, science, math and computers were 45 too, 55 age
one-tenth and 25 to 35 age
groups were more than one-tenth. Eventually, In engineering 9 to 19% of learners held degrees
.
Overall
, In all subjects Canadian students
same 100% both students
distinct subjects the ages 25 to 35 and 45 to 55 age
groups were held degrees
. Moreover
, the highest pupils held degrees
in social and the lowest held degrees
in others and humanities.Submitted by prit699731 on
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