The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to English,in 2000 and 2010
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the amount of UK students from one particular university in England who can communicate in different languages other than English in the Remove the comma
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2000 and 2010.
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language
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amount, whilst Add an article
a small
German
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the German
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has not shown any changes but Use synonyms
French
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the French
language
has reduced its share.
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Spanish
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the Spanish
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in 2000 with 30% of Use synonyms
share
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2010. The Use synonyms
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later the number dropped by half in 2010. Add a comma
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year
to 20% in 2010.
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French
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the French
language
was at identical value with Use synonyms
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other languages
language
in 2000, which decreased by 5% after a decade. Use synonyms
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were at 10% and 20% respectively and in 2010 it was increased by 50% and 100% each.Fix the agreement mistake
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