The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs illustrate the

proportion

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of time that

adults

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adults'

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jobs spent on different occasions in a specific country between 1958 and 2008. Working was the main activity of working adults in both years and its

proportion

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increased.

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going out with family or friends and sleeping were the remaining noticeable activities

that

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their percentages decreased over time. In 1958, the

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of working was around a

third,

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demonstrating the main activity of working adults.

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increased by almost 10% after 50 years and empowered its position. Sleeping and hanging out with people

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the remaining significant activities in 1958 with just under a third and a fifth respectively.

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the

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of sleeping decreased to a quarter, going out with friends or families saw the most drastic decrease of approximately 10% over time. The remaining activities

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only contributed minor percentages in 1958,

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, relaxing at home increased its ratio of 8% to 13% over 50 years.

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other hobbies rose only slightly to 8%, travel to work, the lowest in 1958 with an insignificant fraction, increased to 8%

at the end

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of the period.