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the shown line graph demonstrates the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries and the diagram presents the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

the shown line graph demonstrates the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries and the diagram presents the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The line chart illustrates how many
books
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 were borrowed from June to September
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2014 from four different village
libraries
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pand
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and
 the pie graph shows the ratio of genres of
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 that
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 from these
libraries
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.
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, the number of
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 that were
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borrowed
 from West Eaton and Church Mounth
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 increased gradually over time,
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 value decreased consistently for
library
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the library
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 in Ryeslip. The primary type of
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were
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 fiction throughout the period. In June, the number of
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 which were
barrowed
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borrowed
 from West Eaton and Church Mounth
libraries
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 was 50 and
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 value increased for the former to 150 over the two months before remaining relatively constant at
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 level. The latter library exhibited a similar trend but reached 150
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at the end
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 of the period.
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 the number of borrowed
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 decreased moderately from around 300 to approximately 175 over the period,
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 value varied between 100 to 300
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 for a library in Sutton Wood. There were five different types of
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 that were borrowed,
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, the primary type was fiction with just over 40%. The second-highest was biography with nearly a fifth
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followed by history and science with 14%. The lowest proportion of book categories belonged to self-help
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 with a tenth during 4 months in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, libraries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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