The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of five different types of
energy
produced in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, coal and gas were the most significant suppliers of energy
in both years. All sources of power displayed an increase in production with the exception of petro
Change the capitalization
Petro
who
observed a fall in supply. There was minimal change over the Correct pronoun usage
which
ten year
period.
The largest suppliers of Add a hyphen
ten-year
energy
in 1995 were coal and gas with 29.80% and 29.63% respectively. Both these sources showed a slight raise
of about 1% in ten years.
In 1995, Correct your spelling
rise
petro
was Change the capitalization
Petro
also
a leading manufacturer of power with 29.27%. However
, petro
suffered a substantial fall in production to 19.55%. Change the capitalization
Petro
This
was the only energy
source who
observed a decrease in manufacturing. Nuclear and other represented the smallest areas of Correct pronoun usage
that
energy
production in 1995 with 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. Both theses
areas each had about Correct your spelling
these
a
5% in the Correct article usage
apply
ten year
period.Add a hyphen
ten-year
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