The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
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The pie charts
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of water for three various purposes across six major parts of the world. The notable fact seen from the displayed charts is that there exists a dominant use for agricultural means, which applies
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all areas except Europe and North
America
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. A great lump of percentages is seen from agricultural use, partaking well above 70% for Africa, Central
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, South East
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, and South
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Europe and North
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, where both
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their water production mainly for industrial activities. Domestic needs
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the least demanding sector for water provision in every mentioned
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, but not for South
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where the numbers lay a thin difference with industrial uses. In general, none exceeds a 20% threshold, and an even lower boundary of 10% for Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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