The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
This
essay will describe the pie charts presented above which showing
the different activities of working adults and the Wrong verb form
show
time
they spent within
the Change preposition
between
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
1958 and 2008 in certain Change preposition
apply
country
.
As Fix the agreement mistake
countries
it
can be predicted, for working adults, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
activity
that spent
Wrong verb form
spend
most
Correct article usage
the most
time
is working, it is applied for both
years as well. Sleeping is the second most time spending
Add a hyphen
time-spending
activity
, which also
Add a missing verb
has also
seen
for Add a missing verb
been seen
both
years. However
, the time
percentage they spent for both
years and both
activities is different. As per
1958, working and sleeping only Change preposition
of
takes
about the same percentages, which are 33% for working and 32% for sleeping. But, for the year Correct subject-verb agreement
take
of
2008, only working Change preposition
apply
that is
Verb problem
hours
increasing
in its percentages by 9%, but sleeping Wrong verb form
increased
time
is
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
about
7% in 2008.
The smallest Change preposition
by about
time consuming
Add a hyphen
time-consuming
activity
for 1958 is travel time
to work by 2%. But the result is different for 2008, the smallest time
they spent on an activity
is surprisingly, going out, which was originally 19% in 1958, but decreasing
Wrong verb form
decreased
for
about 13%, and became only 6% in 2008.Change preposition
by
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, activity, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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