The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the cost of imported products to New
Zealand
from two different countries; Japan
and Australia
. It also
distributes the changes over 10 years from 1994 to 2004, using the measurement of million
New Zealand
Dollars.
Overall
, the money spent on imports from both nations varied through the decade, however
, at the beginning and the end of this
period, Australian goods were purchased more than Japanese ones.
In 1994, Australia
exported services of 4000 million
to New Zealand
, which was a net of 100 million
higher than the Japanese exports. Then
both countries achieved a significant rise reaching a peak of more than 600 million
approximately in 1996.
Following that, both industries experienced a drop in 1999, while
about 4000 million
were imported from Japan
, the decrease reached 3000 million
coming from Australia
.
In contrast
, another increase was marked in 2000 in Japan
, when it hit 6000 million
again, followed by a drastic downward graph until 2004, which is the time that Japan
exported the lowest rates of all years by 2000 million
only.
Nevertheless
, a higher rate was scored between 2000 and 2001 in Australia
, reaching more than 7000 million
. However
, this
was followed by a slight drop in 2002, when Australia
sold products valued at 5000 million
. To New Zealand
. Moreover
, Australia
's figure went through a dramatic upgrade scores reaching the highest importing amounts of 8000 million
in 2004.Submitted by makahlehaseel on
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