The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the cost of imported products to New
Zealand
from two different countries;
Japan
and
Australia
. It
also
distributes the changes over 10 years from 1994 to 2004, using the measurement of
million
New
Zealand
Dollars.
Overall
, the money spent on imports from both nations varied through the decade,
however
, at the beginning and the end of
this
period, Australian goods were purchased more than Japanese ones. In 1994,
Australia
exported services of 4000
million
to New
Zealand
, which was a net of 100
million
higher than the Japanese exports.
Then
both countries achieved a significant rise reaching a peak of more than 600
million
approximately in 1996. Following that, both industries experienced a drop in 1999,
while
about 4000
million
were imported from
Japan
, the decrease reached 3000
million
coming from
Australia
.
In contrast
, another increase was marked in 2000 in
Japan
, when it hit 6000
million
again, followed by a drastic downward graph until 2004, which is the time that
Japan
exported the lowest rates of all years by 2000
million
only.
Nevertheless
, a higher rate was scored between 2000 and 2001 in
Australia
, reaching more than 7000
million
.
However
,
this
was followed by a slight drop in 2002, when
Australia
sold products valued at 5000
million
. To New
Zealand
.
Moreover
,
Australia
's figure went through a dramatic upgrade scores reaching the highest importing amounts of 8000
million
in 2004.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words zealand, japan, australia, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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  • consistency
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