The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie chart compares information about the percentage of a family's
food
budget
spend
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on cooking at home and eating
meal
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meals
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at a
restaurant
in four
diffrent
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different
years. The line chart illustrates information about the number of
meals
eaten in fast
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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and sit-down
restaurant
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restaurants
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, respectively.
Overall
, earlier families used to spend only a small portion of their
food
budgent
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budget
on
restaurant
meals
, but the ratio changes
subsequently
every year. In the
last
period family
spend
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spent
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half of their eating expense on hom cooked
food
and
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the remainning
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remainning
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remaining
half is
spend
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on eating
meals
outside
house
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the house
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. In 1970, a family spent only 10% of their
food
budget on
restaurant
meals
. The ratio increases by 5% in the year 1980 and
the
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in the
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following
decade
the ratio significantly
increases
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increased
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to 35%. In the next
decade
i.e. 2000 the amount
spend
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spent
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on
home cooked
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home-cooked
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food
and
restaurant
meals
became equal. Meanwhile,
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the
a
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total
meal
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number of meals
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eaten at fast
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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and
sitdown
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sit-down
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restaurant
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restaurants
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is
same
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the same
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at the count of 20
meals
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in
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1970. In
he
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the
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following
decade
,
sit down
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sit-down
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restaurant
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restaurants
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have more
cutomers
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customers
than
to
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apply
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fast
food
meals
, the number of
meals
are
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is
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around 34 and 27 respectively. In the next
decade
,
consumption
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the consumption
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of fast
food
meals
have
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had
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significant growth reaching around 55 in 1990 and around 85 in 2000.
However
,
gradual
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a gradual
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increase in the consumption at sit down
restaurant
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restaurants
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can be noticed, with the number of
meal
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meals
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around 42 in 1990 and 46 in the year 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurant, meals, decade with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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