The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below illustrates the chain food production process in America.

Overall

, there are two main stages: The processing to create

products

and the distribution to different places to consume. The first stage shows food

products

like meat, eggs, milk or seafood…. are mainly derived from farms, sea and

livestocks

Correct your spelling

livestock

. After that raw materials are going to be moved to a food processing factory to

process

Wrong verb form

be processed

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into

products

and packaged carefully to ensure quality. The next stage, after being packaged, those

products

will be transferred to the distribution

center

Change the spelling

centre

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. Afterwards

Unnecessary verb

apply

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through transportation, goods are going to be brought to retail for home preparation and consumed at home. Or they will be moved to restaurants for restaurant preparation by serving customers or self-serve (barbecue).

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