The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the chain food production process in America.
Overall
, there are two main stages: The processing to create Linking Words
products
and the distribution to different places to consume.
The first stage shows food Use synonyms
products
like meat, eggs, milk or seafood…. are mainly derived from farms, sea and Use synonyms
livestocks
. After that raw materials are going to be moved to a food processing factory to Correct your spelling
livestock
process
into Wrong verb form
be processed
products
and packaged carefully to ensure quality.
The next stage, after being packaged, those Use synonyms
products
will be transferred to the distribution Use synonyms
center
. Afterwards Change the spelling
centre
is
through transportation, goods are going to be brought to retail for home preparation and consumed at home. Or they will be moved to restaurants for restaurant preparation by serving customers or self-serve (barbecue).Unnecessary verb
apply
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