The chart below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The chart below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The
chart
shows information about the number percentages in the food budget spent on restaurant
meals
and
home
cooking
while
the graph shows information about the number of
meals
eaten in sit-down
restaurants
and fast-food
restaurants
, and both the
chart
and graph are in 1970, 1980, 1990, and 2000. As can be seen from the
chart
, it is obvious that the percentage of
home
cooking decreased
whereas
the percentage of
restaurants
increased. In the graph, there was an increase in both fast food and sit-down
restaurants
;
however
,
while
sit-down restaurant
meals
increased gradually, from 20 in 1970 to 50 in 2000, fast food
meals
rose dramatically, starting at 20 and reaching a peak at 80 in the
last
year. In the
chart
, in 1970,
home
cooking was nine times as much as
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restaurant, composed 90 to 10.
Nevertheless
, the figure for
home
cooking dropped slowly year on year and in 2000 both figures were the same amount with 50.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, meals, home, restaurants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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