The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of
students
from one
English
university who spoke one or more
languages
besides
English
in 2000 and 2010. Generally speaking, during both years
Spanish
was the dominant
language
among people that knew any other
language
other than
English
. In 2000, we can notice that way more
students
did not know other
languages
comparing
Wrong verb form
compared
show examples
to the
students
in 2010. In 2000, 30% of the cohort had
Spanish
only as a second
language
, being the most popular chosen
language
after
English
.
Additionally
, 20% of
students
only spoke
English
, constituting the second largest proportion.
Spanish
is followed by French and other
languages
, which represent 30% of the total. Meanwhile, in 2010 an increasing number of British
students
spoke
Spanish
, 35% to be exact, and only 10% had
English
as their only
language
.
Furthermore
, an additional 5% of
students
spoke other
languages
besides
German,
Spanish
and French
comparing
Wrong verb form
compared
show examples
to 2000.
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