The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of

students

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from one

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university who spoke one or more

languages

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besides

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English

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in 2000 and 2010. Generally speaking, during both years

Spanish

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was the dominant

language

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among people that knew any other

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other than

English

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. In 2000, we can notice that way more

students

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did not know other

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comparing

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to the

students

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in 2010. In 2000, 30% of the cohort had

Spanish

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only as a second

language

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, being the most popular chosen

language

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after

English

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, 20% of

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only spoke

English

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, constituting the second largest proportion.

Spanish

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is followed by French and other

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, which represent 30% of the total. Meanwhile, in 2010 an increasing number of British

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spoke

Spanish

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, 35% to be exact, and only 10% had

English

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as their only

language

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, an additional 5% of

students

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spoke other

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besides

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German,

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and French

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to 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, english, languages, spanish, language with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people buy local food?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish