A government's role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure, such as roads, water and power. All other services, such as education, health and social security, should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

considered

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government's responsibilities are limited to

supply

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supplying

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defense

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defence

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cabality

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capacity

capability

and infrastructure

such

as roads, water, and power,

while

other services like schooling, healthcare, and social security should be provided by private sectors or

people

in

comunities

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communities

.

This

essay will explain why I disagree with

this

statement for two reasons.

First,

it is the

governments

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government's

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responsibility to ensure the welfare of its

people

, and

second,

services built by private sectors or each

communities

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community

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will only grow exclusivity.

Firstly

, warranting

people

's welfare is the role of the leader of the community. Each

individuals

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individual's

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well-being

supposedly

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guranteed

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guaranteed

by the authority from primary needs to tertiary needs. Primary needs include education, healthcare management, and social security.

This

is to ensure that all human beings have the same rights to access and live the same quality of life. If their rights to access daily necessities are exclusive

for

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a certain group of

people

, it will be only a matter of time before a horizontal conflict

arise

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.

Morover

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Moreover

, putting the development of human basic needs to private sectors will heighten the exclusivity. Not all

areas

have the same capacity to build facilities with the same standard, so, less developed

areas

are most likely will be left behind in terms of the

qualities

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quality

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of infrastructure and

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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.

For example

: schools in suburban

areas

most of the

times

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time

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does

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do

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not have the same infrastructure and technologies as the schools in urban

areas

.

Thus

, resulting in the quality of human

resource

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resources

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that are produced will

also

differ. In conclusion, I believe it is the role of

people

in power to make sure the

people

they lead

has

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the same quality of life and access to

daly

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daily

needs as it will reduce the potential of having civil conflict, and

also

to ensure inclusivity for all.