The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar
chart
depicts the number of exports
made by a country in five categories namely Petroleum products
, Engineered goods, Gems
and Jewelry
, Agricultural products
, and Textiles
between 2015 and 2016, while
the table chart
presents the alteration of values percentage in the same period. Overall
, the percentages of the exports
increased in the latter year based on the first chart
, while
according to
the second chart
, Textiles
was the category which made the highest changes in values and Gems
and Jewelry
was the only category which witnessed a decreasing trend.
First of all, in 2015 Petroleum products
achieved the highest number of exports
with over 60 billion
, followed by Engineer goods with more than 50 billion
, Gems
and Jewelry
totaling above 40 billion
, Agricultural products
were 30 billion
and Textiles
with just about 25 billion
. However
, in the next year, all the products
experienced increasing exports
except Gems
and Jewelry
exports
which fell down about 5.18% and earned almost 40 billion
, unlike the previous year. For Petroleum products
, Engineer goods, Agricultural products
and Textiles
, the percentages of exports
increased by 3%, 8.5%, 0.81%, and 15.24% respectively. Textiles
experienced the highest alteration, while
Agricultural products
had the opposite trend.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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