The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of
water
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in six parts of the world that are used for separate purposes: industrial, agricultural and domestic statistics follow the percentage rate.
Overall
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, the amount of
water
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used for industrial in 3 areas: Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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account for over 80 percent.
While
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water
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used for agriculture in Central
Asia
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accounts for at least in six areas. It can be easily seen that Africa's
water
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and Central
Asia
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's consumption have a striking similarity to that of South East
Asia
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. More than 80% of
water
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in all three continents went into agricultural fields. The amount of
water
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consumed by houses in there is below 10 percent and 5-12% for industrial.
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, in North America and Europe about half of the
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is required in industrial sectors, almost one-third for crop cultivation, and 13-15% for people’s household use.
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, agricultural
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consumption in South America accounts for more than 2/3 of total
water
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use.
Water
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used for industrial and houses are 10 and 19 percent respectively.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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