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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
two
 pie charts compare what and how many
languages
 English
students
 spoke at a university located in England over
two
 different years, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Spanish was more prevalent among
students
 compared to the other
languages
 in both years. It is
also
 clear that
students
 speaking German stabilised at 10% over the period shown,
while
 the remaining student groups witnessed significant changes. In 2000, Spanish was spoken by 30% of
students
, which was
also
 the largest proportion in that year.
This
 was double the figures for French and another
language
 and
treble
Verb problem
triple
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 the figures for German and
two
 other
languages
. In comparison, the number of
students
 who could not communicate in any
language
 except for the native one was
also
 lower but not much, accounting for one-fifth. In 2010, there was a mere 5% rocket in
students
 speaking Spanish, another
language
, and
two
 other
languages
 to 35%, 20%, and 15%, respectively. Spanish’s figure continued amounting to the largest percentage in 2010.
In contrast
, the figures for no other
language
 and French plummeted considerably to 10%, comprising one-fifth of the
students
 in total.
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