Some people believe that governments should invest more in improving public transportation systems to reduce traffic congestion and air pollution. Others argue that individuals should take responsibility for reducing traffic problems by using public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The opinion below describes the view of reducing

traffic

and air pollution problems by the

government

's responsibility to improve public transport and society's belief in increasing the use of public transport.

First,

in

this

massive and modern life, the use of private vehicles has increased in numerous ways. Most people go to work in their own cars/motorcycles to avoid crowds on public transportation. But rather than avoiding it, they tend to create other problems, like

traffic

congestion and air pollution.

This

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These

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traffic

jams and pollutants can cause serious damage to the environment, especially for future problems, years ahead. To avoid

this

big event, the

government

shall offer affordable public transport to accommodate the need for mobilization, which

also

covers the main areas

such

as workplaces, public places, crucial corners, and so on. But

on the other hand

, the improvisation made is not enough without the will of society to change. The

government

also

need individuals to make a move, changing the way of using private vehicles into massive transportation. It is not an easy job to do, yet if

this

works,

then

the habit will continuously change and reduce the

traffic

jam

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jams

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as well as

air pollution.

As a result

, my opinion

believes

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is

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that there is no one-sided responsibility to decrease jamming and carbon pollutants by using public transportation. Both

government

and individuals shall make changes together in very efficient ways to enhance the positive impacts.