The bar chart bar gives information about shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of expenditures for five main categories in the four big
country
namely, Change to a plural noun
countries
United
Correct article usage
the United
states
, Canada, Capitalize word
States
United
Kingdom, and Japan.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that almost in every country, the biggest expenses
is in Fix the agreement mistake
expense
the
housing. Meanwhile, health care and clothing remain Correct article usage
apply
as
the lowest Change preposition
apply
expenditure
.
In every country, their consumption of money Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
diverse
from each other. In Add a missing verb
is diverse
United
States, Canada, and Correct article usage
the United
United
Kingdom housing is their biggest Correct article usage
the United
expenditures
Fix the agreement mistake
expenditure
perspectively
. Meanwhile, food is where Japan outlays their money. For food, Japan occupied nearly 25% and Rephrase
apply
becoming
the biggest expenditure in Wrong verb form
became
food
category. Add an article
the food
In contrast
, all four countries spend less in
their healthcare and clothes. All four countries except Change preposition
on
UK
spend less than 5% of their income Correct article usage
the UK
in
healthcare. Change preposition
on
By comparison
, US
spend less Correct article usage
the US
in
their clothing.Change preposition
on
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