You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » write about the action you want the manager to take Write atleast 150words
Dear manager,
I hope
ypu
are doing well. I am writing Correct your spelling
you
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about your meal. I took my family to your restaurant because we should to
celebrate my birthday. We going to your restaurant yesterday at 6:00 pm. We chose your Change the verb form
apply
restauran
because your restaurant had a good or positive comment Correct your spelling
restaurant
in
social media.
After I and my family arrived at your place, your waitress Change preposition
on
show
the table Wrong verb form
showed us
we
should Rephrase
where we
to
sit. And Change the verb form
apply
than
we ordered some Replace the word
then
food
that look
delicious, Wrong verb form
looked
such
as seafood and asian
Change the capitalization
Asian
food
. In addition
, we should to waiting
Wrong verb form
wait for
food
so
long. After waiting some of the time, our Change preposition
for so
food
has finaly
come. Correct your spelling
finally
Firstly
, we try seafood but smell
Correct article usage
the smell
it
is not good. Your seafood like not fresh at all. Change preposition
of it
Moreover
, we should to waiting
for a long time for that Wrong verb form
wait
food
.
I hope you supposed
to check Add a missing verb
are supposed
you
hygiene Change the pronoun
your
at
your kitchen. Change preposition
in
This
problem would like to destroyed
your place if you Change the verb
destroy
not
handle Change the verb form
do not
did not
this
program. I am waiting
your positive Add the preposition
waiting for
Correct your spelling
feedback
feadback
Best regardsCorrect your spelling
feedback
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coherence cohesion
Develop a clear introductory paragraph, stating the purpose of writing. Use cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Stick to one main idea per paragraph. Begin the first with the reason for the visit, the second with describing the issue, and a third with the action you expect.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the task. Provide a clear explanation for the visit, detailed description of the problems, and specific actions you desire from the manager.
task achievement
Adopt a more formal and respectful tone when addressing the manager. Avoid using contractions and maintain a polite and formal register throughout the letter.