The charts below show the proportions of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented charts show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other

languages

other than English. The data shows a comparison between 2000 and 2010. It is categorized into some of the most spoken

languages

, including German, French, Spanish, and the rest with no other

language

, another

language

, or more than 2

languages

Overall

, it can be clearly seen from the two charts above that the biggest fraction was Spanish only, with nearly one-third in both charts.

While

the students that spoke more than two

languages

, including English, and German only remained the same, both categories had the same proportion at 10%. Another noticeable rise was observed

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the group of students who spoke no other

language

and less spoken

languages

that were not categorized. Upon detailed observation, it was noticed that the only

language

that had a slight decrease was French, with a downfall from approximately 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010.

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