The line graph below displays the unemployment rates among university graduates in Australia, Canada, Germany, and Japan from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Line chart depicts the unemployment proportion
on
university graduates within 4 countries (Australia, Canada, Germany and Japan) Change preposition
of
about
20 years from 2000 to 2020. In Change preposition
for about
a
hindsight, it can be seen that all of the categories showed Correct article usage
apply
an
downward trend.
Change the article
a
Initially
, in the early period, Australia started the number of unworked people at 8, then
rise
dramatically to 10 (2008) and Wrong verb form
rose
sunddely
dropped to 7 in 2020. Correct your spelling
suddenly
Likewise
, in 2000, beginning at 6 recognised on
Japan. Following that, it Change preposition
in
was grow
to 9 in 2008 and declined over the next 12 years (at 4). In 2000, Change the verb form
grew
Germany
unemployment numbers stood at 5 and climbed to 8 but Change noun form
Germany's
fall
Wrong verb form
fell
at
3 Change preposition
to
at the end
of the period (2020).
Conversely
, Canada showed an
Change the article
a
fluctuative
Correct your spelling
fluctuating
rates
, it started at 7Fix the agreement mistake
rate
,
but dropped dramatically at 6 in 2018, Remove the comma
apply
then
reach
a peak in 2012 (10) and Wrong verb form
reached
ends
at 6 in 2020, it was far fewer Wrong verb form
ended
that
Correct word choice
than
japan
and Capitalize word
Japan
germany
but slightly under Australia.Change the capitalization
Germany
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