The hotel were you and your family spent the weekend did not offer the service they had promised. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain the problem. • State what action you would like from the hotel. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam
Hope you are doing well. I write
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about your poor service during me and my family in your hotel
. Let me introduce my self
, I am Vijay and I booked your Correct your spelling
myself
hotel
for my parents
wedding anniversary. I was looking for Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
hotel
that Add an article
a hotel
provide
birthday Change the verb form
provides
cakes
and I found your hotel
on social media and then
I decided to booked
your Change the verb
book
hotel
.
Me and my family arrived in
your Change preposition
at
hotel
at
23 April 2020 around 10:00 am. At that time I asked your staff about my birthday Change preposition
on
cakes
but she told me if the cake not
done yet. Add a missing verb
was not
Moreover
, I would like to gave
my Change the verb
give
parents
surprise
. I waited around 4 Correct article usage
a surprise
hour
for the Change to a plural noun
hours
cakes
. After waiting for a long time, finaly
my Correct your spelling
finally
cakes
it is already to serve
. But I think there is wrong with Change the verb form
served
that
Correct determiner usage
those
cakes
, because that's cakes
not
look Add a missing verb
do not
likes
Wrong verb form
like
a birthday
Correct the article-noun agreement
birthday cakes
a birthday cake
cakes
. On the other hand
, they did not write my parents
' names on the cake even I
Correct word choice
though I
request
them to write my Wrong verb form
requested
parents
' names on the top of cakes
.
I am completely Correct article usage
the cakes
dissapointed
with your service. I would like you to refund my money or you could Correct your spelling
disappointed
to
give me an extra time to stay overnight at your Change the verb form
apply
hotel
. I am looking forward to your positive response
Best Regards,
JoySubmitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single idea clearly and concisely; avoid mixing multiple thoughts in one paragraph. This will improve the logical flow and comprehensibility.
Coherence and Cohesion
Utilize linking words and transitions appropriately to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs, thereby enhancing the cohesion of the letter.
Task Achievement
Adopt a more formal tone throughout the letter to suit the nature of a complaint to a hotel manager; avoid casual language and ensure grammatical accuracy.
Task Achievement
Carefully address all the points of the task: Introduce yourself in a more formal manner, describe the problem concisely and make your desired outcome clear.
