The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates how much
adults
spent their time on six types of activities (working, sleeping, going out, relaxing at home, travel
to work, and other interests) in two different Wrong verb form
travelling
year
(1958 and 2008). The data is presented in percentages.
In general, working was the most popular activity that Change to a plural noun
years
adults
engaged in both 1958 and 2008. In contrast
, travel to work was the least activity that adults
spend in those year
.
In 1958, most Change the determiner
that year
those years
adults
preferred to spend their time working with the
total Correct article usage
a
percentage
of 33%, followed by sleeping with a percentage
of around 32%, and going out (19%). Moreover
, the rest activities such
as other interests, relaxing at home, and travel to work, had a low percentage
below 10%, with total percentages of 19%, 8%, and 6% of each.
In 2008, working still had the highest percentage
with a total of 42%, an increase from 1958. Meanwhile, sleeping only had a total percentage
of 25%, a decrease of around 7% compared to 1958.Submitted by kucinglab on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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