The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The bar chart specifies
amount
of children, men, and women who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable daily Add an article
the amount
throughout
2001 and 2008. Change preposition
between
Overall
, largest
portion is always eaten by women, with men coming in second. Consistently, children always ranked Add an article
the largest
last
. Throguhout
the years, the amount Correct your spelling
Throughout
has
of Unnecessary verb
apply
vegetable
eaten has increased for all three categories.
From 2001 to 2006, the amount eaten by men and women has a sizeable gap. The gap dropped to around 3-4 the following year.Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
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