The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkwort and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two provided graphs demonstrate the
silkworm
's life cycle and the procedure of silk cloth creation.
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Overall
, the duration of a Linking Words
silkworm
's life rotation from eggs to moth is months, with the set of stages from Use synonyms
silkworm
lava formation to a cocoon. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the production of silk requires steps of selecting, boiling, unwinding, twisting, and weaving, Linking Words
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supported by additional tools.
The periodicity of Change preposition
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silkworm's
life begins with an egg which is nurtured for 10 days by a moth. It Correct article usage
a silkworm's
then
continued with a crack which emitted a Linking Words
silkworm
larva. Use synonyms
Then
, they consume mulberry leaf from the range of a month to 6 weeks until a Linking Words
fiber
comes to the surface of it. Change the spelling
fibre
The next step is
that the filament, which was maintained for 3 to 8 days, transformed into a cocoon which Linking Words
then
became a moth in 16 days.
The manufacture of silk fabric starts Linking Words
initially
by selecting the qualified cocoon and boiling it with scorching water. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it has to Linking Words
be unwind
until it shows approximately 300 to 900 meters of Change the verb form
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strand
. Add an article
the strand
Finally
, twist it with a pot filled with dye and weave it.Linking Words
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