The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of people in Australia who exercised regularly in 2010,
according to
age and sex.
Overall
, for almost all ages,
women
exercised more than men. It is
also
noticeable that boys aged 15 to 24 and
women
aged 45 to 54 accounted for the highest percentage of the six age brackets. Regarding people aged 15 to 24, 52.8% of males took up regular physical activities in 2010, 5.1% higher than that of females.
Besides
, in the groups aged 25 to 34, the proportion of men and
women
was 42,2%, and 48,9% respectively in 2010. In 2010, over 50% of
women
aged 35 to 64 exercised regularly,
while
the figures for men in the same age groups were much lower, ranging from 39.5% to 45.1%.
In addition
, a striking feature is the participation of males and females aged 65 and over was nearly equal, at roughly 47% each.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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