The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010

The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010
A glance at
this
chart provided the figures
of
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a variety of educational settings in England
from
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different sexes in 2010. It is very interesting to find that there are big gaps between women
teachers
and men
teachers
in
the
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nursery
schools
, pre-
schools
and primary
schools
. In the above
schools
, female
teachers
have a bigger team than male
teachers
.
Besides
, women
teachers
and men
teachers
share the same amount in colleges. By reading
this
chart more specifically, it is very easy to illustrate that there are more female
teachers
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in nursery
schools
, primary
schools
and secondary
schools
. What's more, the gaps between women
teachers
and men
teachers
are
more
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bigger in elementary
schools
than those in secondary
schools
.
By contrast
, male
teachers
has
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a larger amount than male
teachers
in higher education and private
schools
. It is clear
to show
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that there are more male
teachers
work
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in universities and private training institutions and there is a big gap between
two
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the two
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sexes in universities. It
also
can be seen and illustrated that the
teachers
from two different sexes
also
enjoy and have
a
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same percentage in colleges.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational settings
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • further education
  • higher education
  • adult education
  • specialist education
  • dominance
  • balanced ratio
  • non-traditional roles
  • trends
  • percentage
  • male teachers
  • female teachers
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • statistical data
  • demographics
  • workforce composition
  • gender disparities
  • graph interpretation
  • educational workforce
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