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the maps below show and industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the maps below show and industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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For starters, the plan to improve the Norbiton industrial
area
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 to turn it into a residential
area
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 with multiple facilities provided for its inhabitants will begin with the removal of its several factories. In the planned future development, there will be an expansion to the roads which will now stretch across the river connecting the farmland with the
area
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. There will
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 be a road leading towards the town,
along side
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 the new roads, there will be a new roundabout directly below the current roundabout in the
area
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 now. The replacement for the factories will include several housing
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area
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 located near the roads and in the farmland. To ease in the new residents, a
school
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 will be built for local children to attend,
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, the playground will be placed nearby to the
school
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 so that
school
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 children are able to have leisure not too far from their
school
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. For our older residents, there will be shops located near the current roundabout and alongside it will be a medical centre for any of our ailing residents.

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