The supplied line chart compares the proportion of female employees in 4 nations, namely the US, France, Afghanistan and Korea, in 2 decades starting from 1985.

The supplied line chart compares the proportion of female employees in 4 nations, namely the US, France, Afghanistan and Korea, in 2 decades starting from 1985.

Overall

, most countries saw

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steady increase in the aforementioned rate.

However

, there was a sharp drop in Afghanistan’s figure and

then

reached its bottom

at the end

of the period. It is noticeable that the USA always took the lead

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the 4 nations throughout the period. The figure rose steadily until a slight drop was experienced in 2000 to 2005.

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trend of female employment percentage in Korea was similar to the USA in the first 15

years

, the proportion registered was fairly lower.

Moreover

, Korea’s data did not decrease in the

last

5

years

. In terms of France, its proportion declined in the first 5

years

,

at

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40% to roughly

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one-third

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third,

and

then

rose

up

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in the next 10

years

. Ultimately, it observed a minor decrease again, which was registered at nearly 45%. In comparison to France, Afghanistan recorded a larger amount of fluctuation. Particularly, Afghanistan surged to 40% in 1995,

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by a significant drop to

one tenth

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in 2000, and

finally

reached its bottom in the

last

year.