You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table depicts the comparison of the total amount of selling in a

coffee

shop in a day. It can be clearly seen that

coffee

is the most

favorite

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compared to other items.

According to

the data,

coffee

was the most popular item chosen by people with more than a hundred selling total in a day. The highest was in the morning when people usually get breakfast with 265 glasses

while

the lowest was in the afternoon with only 145.

Furthermore

, pastries

was

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were

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the second most-liked item in a

coffee

shop with above 80 pieces

were getting

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apply

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sold daily. The peak was in the early of the day with 275 pieces and it became the most sold among other items

while

the minimum was at night with 80 pieces

buying

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bought

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by individuals.

On the other hand

, the latest

favored

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favoured

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was sandwiches and tea which

comparatively

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were comparatively

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lower than others. The maximum sold of sandwiches was 110 slices in 5.30 - 8.30 PM and the minimum was 40 slices in 2.30 - 5.30 PM,

made

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making

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apply

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third

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the third

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place chosen by persons.

While tea

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Tea

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became the least ordered with only 110 cups in the morning and 35 cups in the afternoon.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

199 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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