The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
food
consumption
per individual per kg
, such
as vegetables, fruit, meat
, bread, and seafood, in Australia over a ten-year period from 1950 to 2010. Overall
, by 2010, consumption
had increased in all food
categories except for meat
, which had declined.
The most popular food
which was eaten by Australians in the given period of time was vegetables. Although
,
it can be seen from the graph that the line fluctuated, Remove the comma
apply
however
, at the end
, there were still 160 kg
of vegetables consumed in 2010. For meat
consumption
, in 1950, about 110 kg
was consumed per person annually. There was a decline in meat
consumption
from 1980 to 2000. Initially
, meat
was the second most popular, however
, there was a significant drop, and the result was meat
ranked third in 2010. The consumption
of fruit which was 30 kg
below the meat
made a dramatic increase in 1970-2010, making fruit the second most popular food
.
From 1950-1970, the consumption
of bread rose moderately, however
, in 1970-2000, it plummeted until 2000 and it starts
to have a slight increase Wrong verb form
started
at the end
. In contrast
, there were no significant changes for
seafood Change preposition
in
consumption
as the line shows steady growth.Submitted by nadiamanda.salsabilla on
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