The pie charts compare the amount of online shopping sales for retail parts in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Moreover, those are divided into four categories: travel, film/music, book, and clothes.

The two pie charts illustrate the comparison of online

sales

for retail sectors that have four types

such

as

travel

, film/music, books and clothes in New Zealand in the

year

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of

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2003 and 2013.

Overall

, it can be seen that

travel

dominated

the

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sales

in 2003

while

books'

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book'

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sales

were

fewer

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lower

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.

However

, in 2013, the biggest proportion was

travel

while

the lowest one was clothes.

To begin

with,

travel

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the travel

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category had more than one-third

sales

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which made

this

type

is

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the largest in 2003,

then

fell in 2013 to 29%. Similar to clothes, almost 25% of people purchased them, but

then

decreasing

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decreased

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for

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nearly 10%.

On the other hand

,

although

at first books were the smallest number, it kept increasing from 16% to 22% in 2013.

Furthermore

, the raising of

this

type was similar to film or music, more people chose to buy these

that

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make

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making

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the

sales

was

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greater than before.