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The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts demonstrate the percentage of
the
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British pupils at a university, who are able to speak English,
other
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and other
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languages
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 like
Germn
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German
, French,
Spanish
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and Spanish
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 over a ten-year span, from 2000 to 2010.
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, the number of students who can speak exclusively one language had reduced over the period, except for German.
On the other hand
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, the population of pupils capable of talking in another language had increased slightly. In 2000, 30% of the
student's
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 population
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 allotted to
Spanish spoken
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Spanish-speaking
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 students, which is the majority of the the
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.
Following
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this
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, 20% of the students were merely aware of English.
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, French and
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other
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 were used with the equal
porportion
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proportion
 of 15%.
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 minority of the
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 is related to German and two other
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 (a tenth of the
chart
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 for each). Considering the data in 2010, Spanish remained the most popular language among the pupils, with a negligible 5% rise.
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, the popularity of other
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 increased by 5%.
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, the
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is consists
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 of four equal parts of 10% allocated to only English, German, French and the
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two other
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 speakers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • proficiency
  • linguistic diversity
  • polyglot
  • language acquisition
  • second language (L2)
  • foreign language
  • fluency
  • working knowledge
  • mother tongue
  • language competence
  • language decline
  • cultural exchange
  • global language
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